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A bird's home sways
like gypsy hips.
Within its walls a strand
of my hair was woven
with your cardigan thread
A coastal sigh set
metronomes into motion.
Fledgling robins stir
& rock in cradles. Their
breasts flush, fevered
from dreaming us.

Date: 2007-05-07 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
yes ma'am. :)
i'll update soon.

Date: 2007-05-07 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmmjay.livejournal.com
YIIIIIIIPPPPEEEEE! I ACTUALLY HAVE STUFF TO BRING! WOOT WOOT!


i like your poem. it made me feel soft.

brang it.

Date: 2007-05-07 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
thas my faverit kind of feedback; but how did it make you feeeeeel

Re: brang it.

Date: 2007-05-07 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmmjay.livejournal.com
it made me feel like the Downy Bear puked his softy goodness all over me...fr rlz.

so small, so delicate, so niiice. . .

it reminds me of weather

Date: 2007-05-07 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com
it made me feel gay in th good way? It made me feel as big as a coast!--mza.
From: [identity profile] lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com
how about simpler: I like yr poem. Furthermore, yr family's c00L.--mza.

yrz is t00!

Date: 2007-05-08 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
haha aw. that means alot from someone so clevah. receive that, hyah!

no you receive this

Date: 2007-05-09 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com
sLY & TH FAMILY STONE "Thank You (Falettinme Be Mice Elf Agin)" (6.7 MB)

--mza.

P.S. on second thought you probably got that one, but mebbe not this one: OPAL "Grains of Sand" (5.4 MB)

we began to wrastle

Date: 2007-05-09 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
hellyes! funk is all right.
& the opal i didn't have. s'pretty.
hmm.hmm, i'd imagine you've heard almost everything i got.

ah heard you is under my weight class

Date: 2007-05-09 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com
ah FEEL th Family Stone is actually all cool families everywhere, a really BIG family

Send me a Beirut song, ain't heard them yet

!--mza.

<--- flyweight/bantamweight

Date: 2007-05-09 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
th bass poppin' is so lovely & evocative. i love music with hips & pendulums & meat on its bones.
wish marvin had a better family.

scroll down, click 'Postcards from Italy' & shakeit shakeit.
what about feist? i am just now loving on her.

flight violation

Date: 2007-05-10 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com
ah dig it, something about her singing (not th voice but something about her style of melody) remind me of Everything but th Girl, whom I love ...

OK here are two:

BUFFALO SPRINGFIELD "Flying on th Ground Is Wrong" (3.8 MB)

KENDRA SMITH "Flying on th Ground Is Wrong" (5.5 MB)

K. Smith was also th singer in Opal, coincidentally. One of these nights when my hands don't hurt, you should get on A.I.M. and we'll do a mass transfer ...!--mza.

twist the knife neil

Date: 2007-05-10 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
aw & she has a nice low alto like margo timmins. yes Mass Transfer, later in tha week after the butterfly project is turned in.

dang

Date: 2007-05-09 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flightviolation.livejournal.com
the link i provided for beirut didn't go straight to where i wanted. you gotta select "sounds" on the keyboard & then scroll down.

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