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[concretekiss]

A bird's home sways
like gypsy hips.
Within its walls a strand
of my hair was woven
with your cardigan thread
A coastal sigh set
metronomes into motion.
Fledgling robins stir
& rock in cradles. Their
breasts flush, fevered
from dreaming us.

Comments

[emmmjay.livejournal.com]

hey is the hole meeting tanite?

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

yes ma'am. :)
i'll update soon.

[emmmjay.livejournal.com]

YIIIIIIIPPPPEEEEE! I ACTUALLY HAVE STUFF TO BRING! WOOT WOOT!


i like your poem. it made me feel soft.

brang it.

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

thas my faverit kind of feedback; but how did it make you feeeeeel

Re: brang it.

[emmmjay.livejournal.com]

it made me feel like the Downy Bear puked his softy goodness all over me...fr rlz.

so small, so delicate, so niiice. . .

it reminds me of weather

[lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com]

it made me feel gay in th good way? It made me feel as big as a coast!--mza.

feeling gay & coastal

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

i'll take it.

giving n receiving compliments is not my strong suit

[lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com]

how about simpler: I like yr poem. Furthermore, yr family's c00L.--mza.

yrz is t00!

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

haha aw. that means alot from someone so clevah. receive that, hyah!

no you receive this

[lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com]

sLY & TH FAMILY STONE "Thank You (Falettinme Be Mice Elf Agin)" (6.7 MB)

--mza.

P.S. on second thought you probably got that one, but mebbe not this one: OPAL "Grains of Sand" (5.4 MB)

we began to wrastle

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

hellyes! funk is all right.
& the opal i didn't have. s'pretty.
hmm.hmm, i'd imagine you've heard almost everything i got.

ah heard you is under my weight class

[lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com]

ah FEEL th Family Stone is actually all cool families everywhere, a really BIG family

Send me a Beirut song, ain't heard them yet

!--mza.

<--- flyweight/bantamweight

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

th bass poppin' is so lovely & evocative. i love music with hips & pendulums & meat on its bones.
wish marvin had a better family.

scroll down, click 'Postcards from Italy' & shakeit shakeit.
what about feist? i am just now loving on her.

flight violation

[lostcosmonaut.livejournal.com]

ah dig it, something about her singing (not th voice but something about her style of melody) remind me of Everything but th Girl, whom I love ...

OK here are two:

BUFFALO SPRINGFIELD "Flying on th Ground Is Wrong" (3.8 MB)

KENDRA SMITH "Flying on th Ground Is Wrong" (5.5 MB)

K. Smith was also th singer in Opal, coincidentally. One of these nights when my hands don't hurt, you should get on A.I.M. and we'll do a mass transfer ...!--mza.

twist the knife neil

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

aw & she has a nice low alto like margo timmins. yes Mass Transfer, later in tha week after the butterfly project is turned in.

dang

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

the link i provided for beirut didn't go straight to where i wanted. you gotta select "sounds" on the keyboard & then scroll down.

[crowjake.livejournal.com]

That's a beautiful poem it just flowed quicker than i could read it. I feel like i fell down it.

mmmm

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

thank you very much, sir.

[cowboyjesus.livejournal.com]

I liked your poem.

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

thanks mr!

[piccolissima.livejournal.com]

your poem makes me feel the picture except trade the backround for some lovely beach..
I think it was a comment in quietflame's journal that led me here. do you mind if I add you? I like what I read.

[flightviolation.livejournal.com]

hello miss. thank you very much for the response. & of course i don't mind.